Paring: J/D
Category: Total Chaos.
Date: 25 May 2000
Email: raec@rcn.com and tarshaan@moonlit-eyrie.com
Website: http://theslashnet.com/rae/ and http://tarshaan.moonlit-eyrie.com/.
Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: They're not ours. But I doubt that the real owners would want to claim this, either.

Notes: Rae had writer's block. tarsh got drafted to demolish it.

Once upon a time, in a galaxy far, far away, Rae purred to tarsh: 'Wanna play?'

[rolls eyes] "Like you didn't already know the answer to that?"

Feedback: Feed me, Seymour. Love you long time.

Looking at the planet, nobody would ever have guessed how contrary it could be. How much it seemed a living creature getting its rocks off, rather than an inanimate object. Daniel sighed heavily from his current muddy position on the ground.

"Hey Daniel?"

"What?"

"Not that I'm complaining or anything...but do you plan to spend all day down there?"

"No, Jack. I just thought I'd save myself the trouble of falling down the hill again."

"You would have to ascend to the top in order to fall down the hill again, DanielJackson."

He would have thought the glare he sent Teal'c's way would have been enough to make some impression on the man, but even the sly humour visible in his face stood firm under the heated gaze. Sighing, Daniel took the hand Jack was holding out and pulled himself up. Only to find himself standing ankle deep in mire. Wincing, he stepped out of the localized puddle and rejoined his far-too-spotless team-mates.

"If I could ever reach the top, Teal'c." Daniel attempted to wipe some of the grime from his clothing splashing mud 'accidentally' onto Jack in the process.

"Hey!" Jack sputtered jumping back. The hurried movements sent Jack pinwheeling to save his balance. "You did that on purpose."

"Did not."

"Did too."

"Not."

"Too."

"If you 'boys' are finished..."

Twin glares swung to fry Sam, and she hurriedly raised her hands. "We do have a planet to reconoitre, remember?"

Daniel carefully pretended not to hear Jack's muttered "Yeah, and most of it was on him before he decided to share it with me." Giving up on getting any cleaner, he fished out a mostly unmuddy handkerchief from his pocket and wearily wiped the amazingly sticky mud from his glasses. This stuff was going to itch like hell once it dried.

"So," he asked the world at large, "what next?"

"Ask and ye shall receive." Jack bit out as the first huge drop hit his nose. "Couldn't just keep your comments to yourself, could you?"

"Colonel?" Sam hastily interjected.

"What!"

"I think we had better run."

"Why?" Jack turned quickly in the mud, sliding on his butt in the sludge.

"Now, sir!"

Finally regaining his feet, Jack caught sight of what had Sam so worried. "Oh, for crying out loud," he muttered under his breath. Scrambling to catch up to where the others stood waiting impatiently for him, he risked another glance over his shoulder.

"Come on, Jack!" Daniel shouted, almost dancing in the rain. "We have to get out of here now!"

"Don't you think I know that?" Jack bit out, as they leapt into a run. "Carter, you go ahead, look for someplace to shelter from that... that... from that. Teal'c, cover the backtrail, make sure nothing's following.

"Damnit," he added, swearing to himself, "the damned MALP didn't show any lifesigns here...."

The rain pelted down making the ground slicker and adding yet another sinister dimension to their mission. They couldn't run, let alone walk in the sucking firmament. And it only got worse from there.

The animal bared its teeth showcasing deadly razor-sharp fangs complete with lashing tail. Larger than most of the crocs on earth, this one seemed to have no interest in them, but rather escaping any way 'it' could. A sliver of apprehension ran down Daniel's back.

Concentrating on climbing, he almost missed the noise echoing in the background. It was a familiar yet deadly sound. 'Oh hell.' Daniel yelled over his shoulder into the building storm. "Climb, damn it!"

"What!?"

"Flash flood!"

"Teal'c!"

"I am here, ColonelO'Neill." Teal'c pushed and prodded his way up the hill, half-dragging Daniel and Jack with him. Sam reached the crest, relinquishing her position as point when Jack arrived.

Heaving, they all flopped down onto the rocky outcrop as lightening struck yet again overhead. Thunder rolled, shaking the fragile stone and sent bits of rock down on their heads.

"What the hell is that?"

"Crocodile, Sir."

"That thing?" A comical expression slid over his face as Jack turned to Sam. "I don't think we are on the same planet here, Major."

"Sir?"

"Uh, Sam..." Daniel pointed wordlessly into the distance, feeling his jaw drop embarassingly far, yet unable to do anything about it in the face of the creature now turning its head toward the rumbling water.

"My God... that's got to be at least a couple of miles away," Sam said slowly. "It's huge... that has to be a record for a living organism, surely. Maybe a descendent of the dinorsaurs -- it does look sort of like a cross between a brontosaur, a t-rex, and a--"

"Major!" Jack interrupted, "Get to the important things. Can it see this far? Will it think we are dinner?"

"Dinner?" Daniel spun. "Surely if it were a carnivore we would see some signs of its prey, and the MALP showed no large lifeforms...."

"The MALP," Jack bit out, "obviously has a rather different definition of lifeform than we do. Why else would it be moving this way?"

"Oh, there's no need to worry sir, it's far enough away that we will be able to reach shelter long before it arrives here."

"What shelter?" Jack asked bitingly, just as Teal'c spoke up.

"Then it is no threat at this moment," Teal'c announced reasonably, "unlike," raising a soggy arm, "that."

The crocodile reared its ugly head, a loud hissing sound enveloping their small cave.

"Oh hell." SG-1 ran. Sam and Teal'c scrambled over the ledge scurrying for even higher ground whilst Jack and Daniel ran for all they were worth toward the forest.

"I think that qualifies as a large life form, don't you?"

"For gods sake, Jack, not...now." Heaving with the effort to breathe, run, and forget that their lives were flashing before their eyes, Daniel and Jack tried to put as much distance between the crocodile and the snake-like creature approaching from the south as they could.

"Any...idea...what...lives...in...there?"

"Not...a...clue."

"Bet...has...teeth."

"Planet...has...fucking...teeth."

"Right."

Reaching the relative safety of the forest, they raced for the largest tree and climbed. Fast.

"Where's Carter?"

"Dunno. Teal'c?"

"Can't see either of them. Which way did they go?"

"How should I know? I was kinda busy, Jack."

"Just look!"

"Uh, Jack?"

"What now?" Jack rolled his eyes heavenward.

"Uh, Jack!" Daniel was near frantic now, grabbing onto his arm. "We really, really need to run!"

Jack banged his head against the tree trunk softly several times before looking to where Daniel pointed. Things just couldn't... yes they could. Shit.

"Uh, Jack?"

"Yes Daniel?"

"Duck... now."

Jack swore and complied, clocking himself a good one in the process. Damn trees, branches everywhere. A glob of spittle raced over him, right through where his head had been. "Gee, thanks, Daniel. That was real nice of you," he muttered through the ring in his ears. "Any other native insults you'd like to warn me about?"

"Daniel?"

Reaching his hand over, he shook his partner. Daniel started and turned wide blue eyes, magnified even larger and brighter by the glasses he wore, on his friend.

"Daniel? You all right, Daniel?"

"Hmm?"

"Daniel?"

"The tree, Jack. Look at the tree."

Jack stiffened. He knew that tone of voice. Recognised it, and dreaded it. Slowly, he turned his head.

The massive scar in the tree's bark caught his eye first. He frowned; it hadn't been there when they'd first got to this branch. In fact, it was speading....

"Uh, Daniel?"

"Yes, Jack?"

"Is that what I think that is?"

"Yes. It is."

"Great," Jack muttered, turning his head to the sky, "acid-spitting monkeys. Why couldn't it have been something simple, like fire?"

"Uh, Jack?"

Jack dropped his head forward again, banged it twice more against the treetrunk, carefully avoided the acid-splash.

"Don't tell me, Danny. Just wake me up. I swear I'll never eat chilli before bed again. Just wake me up...."

"Jack?"

Jack raised his head, reluctantly, eyed Daniel with a decidedly disgruntled look on his face. "I'm not asleep, am I?"

Daniel shook his head sombrely. "No. But, Jack--"

Jack waved his hands, cut off whatever Daniel was going to stay. He looked around, and then almost wished he hadn't. Three monkeys were sitting a tree over, watching them. Another four perched in another tree. Out of the corner of his eye, he spied another group. Several of the small apes were furiously working the muscles of their throats; clearly gearing up for something. More of those acid spitballs, he realised with a wince.

Great. These things hunted in packs. Raising his eyes to the sky, he found himself half-praying, "Oh, come on! Give us a break here!"

In the silence following his shout, the soft creak beneath them was ominous in its intensity....

The monkeys screeched, jumping around on branches and spitting haphazardly in every direction before taking off into the darker recesses of the forest. The branch Jack and Daniel had used for their getaway, gave way under the combined weight of the men. They landed hard on the forest floor.

"Uh, Daniel? Do I really want to look?"

"Nope. Wouldn't." Stark fear reflected on his face.

They took off like bats out of hell, neither one knowing where they were going, just running. Roots rose out of the ground, seeking to entrap them. Stumbling over each other in haste, neither one noticed the marsh until they were upon it and in it.

"Ow. Ow. Ow!" Daniel hopped around on one foot.

"What now?"

"Nothing, I just stubbed my toe."

"Your toe? You make all that noise over a toe!"

"No, I just felt like making noise for no reason." Daniel turned around to blast Jack again. "Uh, Jack. What do you think is wrong with them?"

Jack tossed a cautious glance over his shoulder in the direction that Daniel nodded his head. "Geckos." He breathed out in relief.

"I really hate to bring this up, but..."

"I know, I know, I know!"

"Well?"

"How in the hell should I know?" Jack threw his arms up in the air in frustration. The small lizards were perched on a rock at the edge of the marsh watching them expectantly. Something brushed against Jack's leg pushing him into Daniel. Rock hard muscle greeted his hands as he fell forward.

"Been working out?"

"Only for the last hour."

"I think we have to get out of the water."

"But what about them?"

"Daniel, I didn't trip. Something pushed me."

Daniel hopped out of the water as fast as he could, Jack nearly laughing at the comical display. He followed only slightly slower, but hesitated when Daniel pulled out his knife.

"Uh, Daniel?"

"Don't move Jack." The words were laced with command and Jack complied a bit unsure.

"Daniel, what are you doing?" He tried to remain calm and in control. Something in the water must have affected Daniel's brain.

Daniel bent down toward Jack's leg. Light reflected off the knife as it made its decent in slow motion. Jack was prepared to jump away when he noticed the thing attached to his leg.

"GOD DAMN IT!" Jack held still, moving only his arms to punctuate his anger. "Alright, I want an answer and I want it NOW! Who broke the god damn mirror?"

"Don't look at me. Quit fidgeting."

"Cursed then."

"Cursed?"

"You know, like...May you live in exciting times."

"I have no idea. There." Daniel snickered patting his leg. He looked up. "You didn't feel that thing?"

Jack shuddered at the black slug held on the end of Daniel's knife. "Nope. But I think I really need to sit down."

"NOT IN THE WATER!" Daniel grabbed Jack as he crumpled.

There were a great many rocks lying hidden beneath the brackish marsh water, and Daniel was convinced he hit every single one while hauling Jack's limp body to dry land.

Well, as dry as land hereabouts seemed to get, anyway. It would no doubt be a good idea to get Jack out of the mud until he could wake him up and figure out why he'd fainted, but the best he could do was a knoll which seemed to be shedding handfuls of grass faster than he had his hair in the aftermath of that One Great Hairdying Adventure when he was fifteen.

Carefully making sure there were no other slugs currently making a meal of either of them, Daniel laid Jack out and pondered his next step. Jack's breathing was a little fast, his pulse slightly erratic. When he looked, he discovered there were two red lines beginning to snake tentacles out from the slight puncture wound on Jack's leg.

Swearing, he reached toward his belt for his snake-bite kit. Slugs were supposed to suck blood, damnit, not excrete poison. A soft moan from Jack and he hurried his movements, pulling out the knife and slicing quickly into the wound before applying suction in an attempt to remove the poison.

The first mouthful he spat out tasted foul. He wouldn't have believed anything could possibly have tasted worse, if he hadn't had to do it again. By the third mouthful, his mouth was tingling, but the red lines that had been appearing about the wound had all but vanished. He kept it up for a little longer, wanting to get rid of all the poison, before tearing open one of the antiseptic packages and slathering it over the cut he had made. Slapping a bandage on top, he turned to check Jack's colour, hoping his friend would wake soon. It wasn't exactly ideal conditions for preventing infection; but until they could return to the stargate it would have to do.

He was concentrating so hard on checking the pulse in Jack's neck, he almost missed the hitch in his breathing.

And it wasn't until he began to get dizzy from holding his own breath while listening for Jack's next that he realised it wasn't going to come.

Afterwards, he never could quite remember how he managed to move through the panic that gripped him. He thought it was quite probably the taste of Jack's lips beneath his that brought him back to himself. Not quite the circumstances in which he'd dreamed of tasting them; and much as he wished it wasn't necessary, he couldn't quite bring himself to regret the memories he'd be building with the feel of firm flesh beneath his lips, the feel of Jack's chest rising with his breath, the soft warmth on his cheek as he turned his head to check the state of Jack's breathing.

And he most certainly could not bring himself to forget the feel of Jack's tongue tracing softly over his lips, mere seconds before the man's eyes opened and he found himself staring frozen into the mesmerising orbs, feeling very much like a rabbit before a cobra....

Given all that, it was really no wonder that the apparition standing just the other side of Jack came as a complete surprise.

Fairy tales, friggin fairy tales. That had to be it. This was the lost island of Dr. Moreou. The land of the Bother's Grimm. Home of the big bad wolf, lions and tigers and bears, oh my! Dorothy and her little dog too! What was next? Quezalcoatl? Dragons? Elves?

Daniel's head fell forward into his hands. This was just too much. 'Okay, think. Just what was going on here?' A sudden inspiration hit. 'It couldn't be this easy, could it?'

The area around them began to change. Exotic plants sprouted. Pigeons roosted in the branches of northwest evergreens. And a vision of black birds swooping from the sky a la Alfred Hitchcock sprang into being. Daniel hastily erased the image replacing it with one of clear blue skies.

Jack moaned from his position on the ground. Daniel fixed a memory in his mind of blue skies, calm seas, and rolling hills before turning to his friend.

"Jack..." Daniel caressed the hard muscles beneath his fingers. "I need you to do something for me."

Soft brown eyes tinged with pain opened at his words.

"Don't think I'm going to be up to much here, Daniel."

Biting back a rhetorical comment, Daniel let out a small sigh. "Jack, focus here. I need you blank out your mind. If you have to think of something, make it the best memory you possibly can and don't let it go."

"Why?"

"I just figured out what is wrong with this planet."

"And that is?"

"It's using our memories against us."

"Huh?"

"I'll tell you about it later. Right now we need to concentrate on getting back to the Stargate. Think you can walk?"

"Sure. In about a day or so." A bitter laugh spilled from dry lips.

"Okay. I'll think of something, something safe." Daniel sat in the dry grass holding onto Jack's now limp hand. The man had fallen back into a restless sleep. It was amazing how much worthless knowledge he had collected over the years and now when he needed it most, it eluded him. Figuring out the planet fed off of their own thoughts was one thing. Beating it was another. And all it took was one small blue smurf still standing in the same spot to remind him.

And why did it have to be Brainy Smurf? He despised Brainy Smurf. Brainy Smurf was egotistical and insensitive and, for all his brains, really not that bright.

So why did it have to be that particular smurf staring up at him?

If it had been any other smurf, any other at all, he would have scooped the little guy up, and out of the way of the orange cat stalking rather incompetently toward him. But since it was Brainy, and he despised Brainy (and part of him never had gotten over the inevitable schoolyard comparisons), and since Brainy Smurf was about as incompetent as they come, he picked up Jack's hand and stroked it instead. And watched, only half unwillingly, as the annoying little midget met his death.

Who knew smurfs bled yellow?

And why wouldn't Jack wake up, anyway? They needed to get out of here. They especially needed to get away from the tiny pair of wire-rimmed glasses staring reproachfully up at him from a fold on Jack's shirt. No matter how many times he threw them away.

This planet-forming business was a real pain.

"Jack?" he rubbed his hand gently over his friends face. "Come on, Jack, wake up?" The skin was rough under his fingers, bristles scratching his palm. Before he could caught it, his mind had made the comparison to the feel of Jack's lips, soft and warm under his own, and his finger moved unconsciously to trace the moist curve.

He blushed furiously when Jack's eyes opened, lips moving under his finger to shape his name. "Daniel?"

He snatched his hand away, turning defensively to the side, and began to babble. He hated it when he babbled, but he couldn't seem to stop himself from focusing on the taste of Jack on his mouth, strong even with the aftertaste of the poison on his lips.

"Uh, yeah, right. You're awake. That's good, that you're awake I mean. We need to get back to the Stargate. This planet, it's, it's dangerous, Jack--"

A sardonic "No kiddin'," from Jack barely interrupted the flow of words from his mouth.

"It takes what's in your mind, and shapes itself after it. We need to get out of here. Fast. Find the others and -- oh, no. The others. Sam and Teal'c. Jack, we have to find them. Tell them what's going on. We have to--"

Jack's hand came up to cover his mouth, halting the flow of words. He looked -- bemused, that was the word. Confused. And very, very sexy. Daniel felt his brain slide to a screaming halt.

"Daniel?"

"Uh--"

"You with us, Daniel?"

"What?" God, his eyes. Such a rich colour, how had he never noticed their colour before? They were so warm, so amused and alive and comforting. How had he never noticed Jack's eyes before?

"Daniel. Earth to Daniel."

"Uh. Yeah. Right." He forced himself to focus; now was not the time to wax rhapsodic over eyes. Even if they were the nicest eyes he'd ever seen. Even if they were Jack's eyes.

Jack's eyes? What the hell was he thinking?

"Jack, we need to get out of here"

"Yeah, so you were saying when I woke up. Want to run that by me again?"

"The planet, it takes its shape from our minds."

The confusion on Jack's face at that comment really was the most adorable thing, Daniel decided. Just a little more puzzlement in those beautiful eyes and he'd be easily the most kissable he'd ever seen the colonel. Kissable. Oh. His lips, they'd tasted so good....

"Daniel?"

Catching the alarm in Jack's voice, Daniel once again forced his attention back to Jack. But Jack wasn't watching him.

"What the hell is happening to the landscape, Daniel?!"

Daniel took a quick look round. The green hills he'd conjured earlier were fading, and he really didn't like the look of what was taking their place. Although, now that he came to think of it, the colour of that outrcropping of rock just over there was a pretty good match for Jack's eyes...

Oh. Shit. Quickly, he called up the scene of rolling hills, blue sky, calm seas that he'd used before. Sighed in relief as the background scenery wavered, then settled back to what it had been.

"Daniel?" Jack was watching him very strangely all of a sudden. Very, very strangely. But oh, that shade of colour in his eyes was-

Damn. There he went again. What was it with eyes all of a sudden? Let alone Jack's eyes. Jack was his friend, nothing more. Just his friend. Fantasies had to stay that. Right. And no matter how sexy he looked with that expression lighting the backs of his eyes, he absolutely could not lean over and kiss him. No matter how enticing the memory of his lips was. Jack had been dying then, for god's sake! What was wrong with him?

"Daniel... What did you just do?"

"Hmm?"

"The landscape. It was changing. I saw it. And then you... did something. Screwed up your forehead, got a sweet little line just," Jack reached out and tapped Daniel between his eyes, just above the bridge of his glasses, "here. Cute as all hell. And then the landscape, it just... stopped.

"What the hell is going on?"

Cute. He said cute. He called him cute. Jack called him cute.

Oh, shit. Now he was hallucinating... this didn't bode well. Not well at all. Not on a planet that took your mind and used it against you....

"Daniel? Concentrate for just a second here, will ya?" There was just a little impatience in Jack's voice.

That was wrong, wasn't it? Shouldn't Jack have been yelling at him by now? But instead, he was looking at him, concern making his eyes luminescent, and-

Damn it. No. He wouldn't do this again.

"Uh, yeah. Right. The planet, it's -- I don't know -- feeding on us, somehow. Taking our memories, our subsconcious, and using it against us. Try and keep your mind blank, ok Jack? Think of safe, pleasant things. Otherwise it'll pull the thought out of your mind and turn it real, and we'll be in more trouble than I think we know how to get out of."

"Make them real?" Jack frowned. "You mean, we're talking Ghostbusters here?!" his voice was incredulous, a matching incredulity in his body language drawing Daniel's gaze back to his face. To his eyes. To those mesmerising, iridescent eyes...

"What?"

"You know, Ghostbusters. What you think is what you get. Remember that scene at the end? Where the Stay--"

A loud rumble overrode his words. Startled, Daniel and Jack whirled around, peering out over the hills behind them. "What on earth is that?" Daniel yelled, staring disbelievingly at the large, white, man-shaped creature approaching, stepping as easily over hills as he would have over rocks.

Jack took one look and groaned. Looked at the clear puzzlement on Daniel's face and concluded that he had never seen Ghostbusters.

Well, if nothing else, at least it proved Daniel's scatterbrained theory, he though, reaching for his gun and wishing despearately for a flamethrower....

Suddenly weighted down, Jack stumbled and would have fallen on his face if Daniel hadn't grabbed his arm.

"Jack?"

"Flame-thrower." Jack whirled around and sent a stream of liquid fire in the direction of the large white being. A sickly, sweet smell filled the air, but the being just kept coming.

"Daniel!"

"What?!"

"Aren't you the one who said blank out your mind?!"

"Oh! Sorry."

Roasting to a delicious brown, the monster's tread slowed. Like the giant from Jack and the Beanstalk, the marshmallow man fell to the ground thunder resonating across the quiet hills. Jack and Daniel were knocked off their feet with the impact, Jack landing with a grunt on Daniel. He stared into bright blue eyes that matched the colour of the sky.

If Jack had thought Daniel's arms were hard, the feelof his body put that recent memory to shame. He'd wondered for a couple years now what it would feel like to be free to touch Daniel at will. Run his hands over the solid muscles hid beneath the baggy green uniform. These little touches, constant little mishaps fed his imagination in the middle of the night. Slick hard silk riding the storm to its apex. Breathy sighs filling the silence in the moonlight. Nirvana.

It took a moment for Daniel to catch his breath. After all Jack's elbow was pressing on his stomach. But when he did look up, he found Jack staring at him with a glazed expression. His body immediately responded to the heat rolling off his friend and blood rocketed to his groin. Jack looked as if he had been given a genie in a bottle and it had granted his greatest wish.

Mesmerized, Daniel watched the tip of Jack's tongue slide provocatively across his lips. 'Lush and sensual,' Daniel thought as he traced his fingers across the soft skin. Jack leaned into the caress, his mouth pressing feather soft kisses to his fingers. His tongue snaked out to capture the marshmallow treat that coated them both when the monster fell to the ground.

"Got chocolate?"

"Got milk?"

"I will."

"You... ah... you missed ... missed a spot...."

Jack was barely able to form the words, so intent was he on the feel of Daniel's mouth on him at last. And best of all was the knowledge that this was Daniel --that he wasn't going to wake up just before he climaxed, to find himself sweating and alone and needy in his bed. This was real; the heat of Daniel's hands roughly exploring up under his shirt, the soft burn of his fingertips scratching across far-too-sensitive skin, the nip of his teeth along his neck, quickly soothed by a slow and thorough lapping of Daniel's tongue. He arched his neck back, moaning, begging for more; more contact, more caresses, more Daniel.

He'd never in his life imagined he'd be grateful for getting bitten by something poisonours; but the ache in his leg was almost the best part of this -- the part that let him know this was here, this was happening, this was real.

"Hmmm?" Daniel's soft inquiry murmured against his skin, hot breath blowing over the monster hickey he just knew he was going to have when Daniel finally pulled away. He jumped, slightly shocked by how good it felt to have Daniel sucking on his neck like he never wanted to stop. Daniel 'hmmm'ed again, enchanted with the reaction the vibrations engendered in Jack. For his part, Jack let his head fall back even further, before suddenly dropping his to the grass beneath them, using his weight and momentum to yank Daniel down on top of him.

Startled wide eyes looked down at him, and he couldn't help laughing. Daniel looked so cute like this, all wild-eyed and needy, and it just felt so damned good to be lying here at last, Daniel's weight pressing him into the solid earth beneath, the scent of flowers and grass lingering in the air about them.

Daniel had a vaguely offended air about him at the laughter, like a cat dumped out of a lap, and all it did was make Jack laugh harder. God, but he was sexy like this. And unless he was very much mistaken, that wasn't a gun in Daniel's pocket; and he was enjoying this as much as Jack was.

Daniel's vaguely offended air turned predatory and dangerous the longer Jack laughed, but he couldn't seem to stop. It was just too good, too close to too many fantasies, and he realised he didn't even want to stop, particularly --Daniel looking predatory was having far too interesting an effect on his cock - and if laughing just made him look more so, then he was all for it. It wasn't as though he was laughing at Daniel, after all....

Daniel evidently got tired of waiting for Jack to quit laughing and explain himself, and had decided to take matters into his own hands. For very suddenly, Jack found himself with an armful of attack!Daniel; the man's hands were everywhere, and, oh god, the things he could do -- was doing -- with his tongue... his laughter stopped like someone had thrown a switch, replaced with moans and whimpers, pleading little sounds Daniel clearly loved to hear.

It didn't take long for Daniel to reduce Jack to a whimpering puddle of putty beneath him; but he didn't let up on his assault in the least. Jack wriggled beneath Daniel, trying to get that wonderfully talented mouth to alight on one or the other of his nipples; stop teasing so damned cleverly and deliver. Daniel allowed the squirming, but removed his mouth, leaning up on his elbows and casually running one calloused fingertip across the path his mouth had taken. He surveyed Jack with what could only be dscribed as a proprietary air; and from the wicked grin that graced those eminently kissable lips, it was very clear that he liked what he saw.

Jack managed to retrieve from some part of his glazed and lust-filled brain the coordination to reach up and yank Daniel back down on him again. As Daniel's lips once again met his skin, it occurred to him that somewhere in the proceedings he'd lost his shirt; he couldn't quite recall where. He couldn't quite dredge up the energy to care, either; the feel of Daniel's tongue and hands working him over was far more important than petty details like clothing. Particularly when those long, clever fingers were toying with his waistband, dipping slightly beneath, then up above again, caressing and stroking as they went. And sliding progressively deeper each time they ventured forth... Jack became rather violently aware of certain pressing parts of his anatomy, and pushed his hips hard up against Daniel, moaning at the contact.

Daniel smiled, loving the way Jack responded so readily to his touch. He'd wanted to have the colonel like this for far too long; had wonderfully detailed dreams and spent far, far too many hours beneath distressingly cold showers trying to recover from the aftereffects of such dreams. But this -- this was real. This was Jack, here, now, writhing beneath him. Almost out of control and completely at his mercy.

And it was far, far better than any dream he'd ever had. Jack's fatigues came undone easily under Daniel's eager fingers; although gaining Jack's attention long enough to lift his hips and slide them down and out of the way took far longer. Probably because he couldn't seem to resist tastingeach new centimetre of skin as it was exposed; had to go over it again, thoroughly, with tongue and teeth and fingers, fixing the taste and feel of this wondrous man beneath him into his memory for all eternity. Even if this was just some strange chemical side-effect of the slug on Jack's part, Daniel was going to be able to feed off this encounter for months.

And if it wasn't; if it was real and would be real still when they stepped back through the Stargate--

Daniel couldn't contain the joy bursting inside him with that thought. Besides, Jack had recovered enough of his equilibrium to begin making inroads on Daniel's own control; and he was determined that this, their first time, he would remember always. Every little detail, every little moan and whimper and plea; and now that he came to think of it, the man wasn't making near enough of those for his taste.

So he did the most distracting thing he could think of. The fact that it was what he most wanted to do right now had nothing to do with his choice; no, it was just that he wanted Jack writhing and compliant and unable to think, and he wanted him that way now.

So swallowing Jack's freshly revealed cock whole was merely the best way to that goal. That he'd been dreaming of this moment for years now just made it that much sweeter.

Jack arched up, screamed his pleasure. Daniel eagerly tasted the hard cock in his mouth; savoured the length of it, pressing solid against the back of his throat. Inhaledthe musky scent of the other man's body, here, in this most personal of spots. He drew back slowly, enjoying the shudders of the body beneath him as he scraped his teeth lightly across the sensitive flesh. Swirled his tongue around the crown, savouring the taste of precum, lingering atop the tip. Then reversed his actions, going down on Jack torturously slowly, his greater leverage easily holding back Jack's hips as the man thrashed beneath him, his cock seeking its way back inside that hot, moist cavern it craved. When his nose was once again buried in the musk of Jack's groin, he hummed, gently, in the back of his throat, loving the whimper of pure pleasure this elicited.

It was perfect. So absolutely perfect; far, far better than he'd ever dreamt it could be. The smell, the feel, the sight, and especially the taste of Jack, held pliant and helpless beneath him, reduced to a whimpering puddle of nerve endings by him, Daniel Jackson, and begging for release. He figured the cat with the canary had nothng on him.

Except for one small thing. Well, two small things. There was still far too much cloth between his skin and Jack's; in the rush to reduce Jack to this needy pile of desire, he hadn't taken the time to do much more than throw off his jacket.

And he couldn't quite escape the feeling of being watched. He knew they were alone; at least, he was fairly certain they had been when they'd started this. Admittedly he hadn't been paying much attention to his surroundings since then. But if teal'c and Sam had found them, surely they would have said someting, or else retreated politely. And yet... he could feel someone watching him. Watching them.

He raised his gaze, being careful to never quite let Jack's cock slip from his mouth. He surveyed the expanse of sweat-slicked skin before him, traced the hills and valleys of a tightly-muscled body. Smiled around the cock in his mouth to see the way in which Jack was straining to remain still, his head rolling from side to side in an effort not to just thrust his cock as far as it would go into Daniel's throat. He brought his gaze back down again, intending to drive Jack a wee bit more mad before moving on to other things; but his gaze caught about halfway down and he stared, horrified, before letting Jack's cock slip from between his lips. He dropped his head, swearing.

After a minute he looked up, hopefully; but no, it was still there. Just sitting there, on Jack's chest, just below his left nipple. Staring reproachfully at him. Clothes, such as they were, stained with yellow.

The damn smurf was back. "God damn it, Daniel! You're killing me here!" Breathing harshly, Jack opened his eyes to find Daniel staring horrified at his chest. Expecting some new torture and swearing under his breath, Jack looked down. It was just a damn smurf. "This, uh, wouldn't be from your imagination, would it?" Jack asked hopefully.

"Not on your life."

"Daniel!"

"Sorry. Smurfs aren't exactly my thing. You?"

Jack had the grace to blush. "Well you said something safe. It was the safest thing I could think of at the time."

"I hate to point this out, but we were having a moment."

"So it's my fault now?"

"Yes!"

Jack grabbed a sock from the ground and starting putting it on.

"Well!"

"Well what?"

"Are you going to get rid of the damn thing?"

"I can't."

"You can't." Daniel sighed. "Why not?"

"I already tried. It's not working."

"Just imagine it away, Jack."

"Don't you get it, Daniel? I tried. Something else is keeping it here. See! It's flickering."

"I'm calling in re-inforcements."

Warily, Jack waited to see what Daniel would come up with. He had a raging hard on that was not getting any better and right now all he wanted was to just jump the Archaeologist, smurf or no smurf. Daniel turned to him with a shrug of his shoulders and a half apologetic, half embarrassed grimace on his face. Jack began to worry. Really worry.

"Beetlejuice, Beetlejuice, Beetlejuice!" Daniel yelled.

"Couldn't you have just had a 'Drop Dead Fred' like everyone else?" Jack moaned.

"I was already getting picked on, Jack. I needed someone with artillery."

"Well why didn't you say so!" Jack plucked a nine mil from the air and shot at the smurf. It reappeared.

"Oooh, smurfs. Where's my Tabasco sauce?"

"Back pocket."

"Right, where else would it be?" Jack threw his hands up in the air and walked around butt naked.

"Say, Daniel?" Beetlejuice eyed the oh-so-delicious Colonel wandering around with one sock on and one sock off.

"What!?"

"When did you get such good looking playmates?"

"I've grown up, if you haven't noticed."

"Well, duh. Still need to find, um, something sweet for myself. If you know what I mean." Beetlejuice elbowed Daniel as he leered at the Colonel.

"Don't even think about it." Jack warned, his clothes suddenly appearing on his body as if by magic.

"Look...," Daniel began.

"Oh but I am." Drool appeared from the corner of his mouth and his tongue dropped to the floor.

"Beetlejuice..."

"Don't say it!" A widget gun appeared in Beetlejuice's hands and he tacked a piece of metal over Daniel's mouth in a flash.

"Nice friend you've got there Daniel." Jack turned the metal into duct tape and pulled it off of Daniel's mouth.

"OW! Couldn't just have imagined it away?"

"What's the fun in that?"

"I give up!"

"You called him."

"So?"

"Well, get rid of him."

"I want him to get rid of the fucking smurf!"

"Daniel! Such language! I always knew you had it in you."

"Strangely enough, that's what I was trying to accomplish."

"Well, I'll just go find myself some flies." Beetlejuice morphed into an odd caricature of an old lady, and swallowed the smurf whole. "Tasty."

"I'm going to find the Gate. Daniel, he's your problem."

"Oh, thanks Jack. You're a real pal."

"Anytime. At least once I get back to my own universe, I can get laid."

"You're such an ass."

"Am not."

"Are too."

"Am not."

"Are too."

"Am not."

"Are too."

"Hey, Daniel. Who's the babe?"

Daniel turned around to find Sam and Teal'c standing less than ten feet away, staring at them with rapt fascination.

"Colonel?" Sam tentatively started.

"Don't ask."

"Beetlejuice, Sam. Sam, Beetle..." Daniel found yet another piece of metal slapped over his mouth. Rolling his eyes, he imagined the tin away himself this time. "Beetlejuice." His playmate disappeared.

"I don't want to know." Sam started laughing.

"What'd ya say we all head home and compare notes? Before we die?" Jack limped a little ways off before turning around to glare at his team. "Now would be good."

Raising an eyebrow in the Colonel's direction, Teal'c started off but stopped to pick a piece of wood off the ground. "I have found something of interest, DanielJackson."

"What is it?"

"It seems to be a mask."

Three voices chorused at once... "PUT IT DOWN!" "OH FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!" "NO! DON'T!"

"Yet another earth custom, CaptainCarter?"

"You have no idea, Teal'c. No idea at all."

With that, the group headed off toward the gate, Jack just shaking his head the entire time. "No way in hell I'm explaining this one. No way in hell."

It started to rain. Hard.

"Well, that solves that problem."

Tune in later for the exciting conclusion of 'Out of the Frying Pan and Into the Fire'. Will our team ever make it to the Gate? Will Jack and Daniel get to finish what they started? Who needed the cold shower? Who's the one who keeps bringing back the smurfs? What happened to Sam and Teal'c while the boys were, er, playing?

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